Problem thesis: Parents not vaccinating their children is a problem because it puts other children at risk
Practical solution: Require all kids to get vaccinated, don't let them play sports or go to school without vaccination record
Research: How many kids get sick because of lack of vaccination by either their parents choice or another unvaccinated kid gave it to them
Media: Make a campaign for parents to get their kid vaccinated
1. Parental irresposibility
ReplyDelete2. Defines it as parents not vaccinating their children
3. There is a clear thesis statement with "because."
4. Does not give contextualization.
5. Is specific to who is being vaccinated...children...and is specific who is creating the problem...parents
6. The problem is unique. I would have certainly never thought about doing this topic for my proposal. So great job on creativity!